Score: 6

"Not bad"

submission: Game Master Vol.2 Ep.8

date: November 1, 2009

Hey! I was pessimistic at first, I thought this was going to suck, but it was actually kind of fun to watch. It didn't really make sense all the time, and the animation wasn't... there... but it was a cool story. It's overall not a good flash submission, but it seems like you put some work into it, so keep it up.

Something for the future: Make better speech bubbles and try making some simple animations.

Flash tutorials!
5/5 6/10

Score: 10

"Fantastic!"

submission: Vector Boom

date: July 4, 2009

I haven't played a flash game all the way through before! This really hooked my attention, and the leveling up made it far more interesting as the game went on. The turrets didn't seem quite as cool as they could have been though. Maybe make them fire bright lasers or something?
But seriously fun! I look forward to it if you make another.

Score: 8

"Solid"

submission: Eridani

date: June 30, 2009

What you have here is awesome. This is a graet piece of solid gameplay-- and a good place to start-- but not a great place to stop!
I played it for a while until I died, so you did this well... but the game is very shallow after one bout.

Try adding differnt enemies or powerups, make the game a little more deep or meaningful!

Score: 8

"Oh hey, it's uh..."

submission: Counting Rhyme Remix/Cover

date: November 6, 2009

Hey, I like this better than your remix. See, with the piano you've got a more filled out song. The soundspace is more balanced-- I mean, don't you think so?

Still needs a little touching up, some better mastering-- which is probably related to the piano synth you used, and that's probably limited by the software you have.
But yeah, this one=I like more.

8/10
5/5

Score: 6

"Wiggety whack!"

submission: comptine d'un autre eteTechnoC

date: November 6, 2009

Hey, cool dude. Amélie. Good movie, good song too. You should try to learn it on piano, it's fun to play.

You have got to fill in the emptiness though! Add a little reverb maybe, put some basslines in there, make a more progressing beat, add some echo effects, put in some sound effects, some crashes, etc. It's just sort of blaaaaand right now. Keep practicing-- haha I just listened to the end. That struck me as funny.
Oh, add pads, too. :)
But above all keep practicing!

Make MOooOAR
5/5 6/10

Score: 5

"Good, now stop trying ot hit me and hit me."

submission: Archive

date: November 3, 2009

This is pretty cool, I see that you're using garage band-- That's one of my favorite drum loops. BUT GOODNESS don't use it for the whole song! change it up! You're doing a really good job though, you should keep practicing. I bet within a year you'll have some really good stuff up here.

uhh... okay so my real review: This is okay, I see that you have a lot of original ideas, they're fresh, but you've got to work on your composition. This piece is pretty boring after the first minute or so of material. One contributor to this is the fact that you use the same drum loop through the whole song, another thing is that you don't use your sound space to its fullest extent, you kind of stay right in the mid-range spectrum with sort of blendy synths. I don't know exactly how to put it, but everything kind of warps together after 0:24.

My supreme advice of what you should do: MAAaakkkee mOooaaarrr
Practice makes perfect. Back in '08 I was garage banding on NG too, now I'm in full swing with FL studio, compare my first and latest songs if you want a better idea. Keep working on that midi-editor thingy to make your own melodies, you're on your way.
5/10 5/5
I liked it.